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From sea to shining sea i saw my father's blood, staining my hands red, to compliment the breathless blue we throw to the sky, blood so red i cannot wash it from my fucking hands, you made me hate...

Performance, Feedback, Revision The first version of this rap was pretty primitive It was like, "Yo, yo, the origin of species Ain't no feces, dawg, believe me…" And that's all I could...