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Hey, Jorge.
Now you sent me some lines,
and so I just wanted to let you know I saw those
and I have
a little response now and a bigger one later.
This response is what any English teacher'd do to that rap.
I examined every subject, predicate, noun verb and article / your style's hard to find
like a Higgs-Boson Particle.
You say, "game on" but I say, "Game over, man."
Your lines are mixed up, like anagrams.
Now, I promise I will have a Newton's Law rap
sometime before the end of the year, no! (laughter). Sometime before the end of January so that's coming soon.
Just wanted to let you know that I didn't forget. Later!