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hectic paper follows the instructions and has good organization
bikini history reading assignment instructions
very carefully
here's the topic prompt
tell us how you came to update that happens
have you ever given up about half that such as smoking drinking regarding your
temper get the best of you
right about this experience assuming your audience is the other percent who
needs or wants to quit
in your first sentence
saint just what your habit was n_y_u_ changed it
then discuss it answering these questions
what made you decide to give up your habit
how did you break it how is your life better now that you are free of the
habit
is sure to avoid writing any how to peter
this paper is about how you quit
proofread your fork correcting any segment
sentence fragments
let's take a look at that the paper as a whole
noticed that it has the indentation
past the first line because we're just writing one paragraph
and it fits in the two hundred to three hundred fifty word limitation let's zoom
in for a closer look
they use to smoke a pack of cigarettes a day but i realized it was horrible for
my health so i gave it up
noticed at that first sentence follows the instructions explicitly
the next sentence
provides the reader with us to remain i_t_n_'s breaking the smoking habit took
their remain status preparation action and maintenance
the three ideas there are very clearly identify
connects sentence
is what i call is signpost sentence if that's your reader know that you're
going to discuss the first of the three main points
first i had to prepare myself for the rough time ahead
specifically has set a date for quitting and got my brain thinking about quitting
for example for a few weeks before quitting i would say if i am smoke-free
several times before falling asleep at night
and here's the second signpost sentence then i had to take action
notice in other words action match up from the topic sentence and thus
signpost sentence
and backed up all my smoking items like my lighters ashtray and to brief
remaining cigarettes
and threw them all the way at the same time i think the cigarettes for all
their help over the years the told them i no longer needed them
and shut the lid and pulled the trash count out to the street
and here's the final signpost sentence
the last stab was probably the hardest
maintaining a smoke-free life meant i had to change
and noticed that the word maintaining goes with the word maintenance
from the topic sentence
maintaining a smoke-free life meant i had to change the behaviors that
triggered my smoking
some traders were eating driving in going to the seven-eleven
i couldn't stop eating their driving but i can't stop going to the seven-eleven
in fact i did not step one foot in a convenience store for almost two years
with the other two triggers i started new habits when i finished eating my
which only toothpick
likewise when i got into the car i would play with the radio dials instead of
lighting up a separate
overall i could not be happier for quitting
my health is much improved and even though the three stages of quitting
where sometimes hard to get through it was all
worth it
the last two sentences there
provide the conclusion they tie into the introduction
and provide
a reference back to the topic sentence of the few remains stages
while it may seem like extra work up front
taking the time to use keywords from the instructions and organized the paper put
the topic sentence three signpost sentences andy concluding sentence makes
for a much better paper