Tip:
Highlight text to annotate it
X
A very strong initial hook, a beginning in which are given to the reader a basis for
understanding what will take place in the middle and after that an ending that can be
open-ended, surprisingly or in most cases an ending that goes to meet the expectations
of the reader. The change of tone in the story of Helen is important. All of you used some
sort of ... continuous comparisons with television, a virtual camera and planted at the head of
one of your characters. You do it all, even unconsciously. This is a good technique, then
we're going to discuss it in the future. The moment your camera moves from the head of
a character at the head of another can no longer use the same tone. Some have used (and
it is absolutely forbidden) a kind unique camera that you are always in the mind of
a single character. One need not look in five, six, seven or eight paragraphs to describe
a character, those things that remain are the things that most impressed us we manage
to see. Keep in mind that consistency is one of those things that you do not personerÃ
if you ever betrayed the, so it's much better to be consistent and a bit 'boring, consistent,
and a little' piùlunghi. Boredom you can be personata, but also the mistakes the lack
of consistency not. The claim is legitimate to deceive, the discourse is precisely how
to do that is not about what you can do. Raymond Carver is a writer of short stories especially,
extraordinary said one of his rules was: "When you have written the story, cut. When you
have finished cutting, let it rest for a while 'and then cut again, when you are not convinced
being able to cut anything wait two or three days and cut again and now when you decided
that your story sucks because there is too little stuff, wait a few days and you will
see that there is still something to be cut. " He is a bit 'extreme, but I found that in
general are absolutely right. It 'hard to cut your own thing, that is, in the situation
of saying, "This sentence I like then I'll leave." The phrase that we like to be left
only if it serves the story.