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Thanks for sending in your website descriptions guys. Did everyone get a chance to read them?
Yeah Kat, I had trouble reading some of yours. Were those your final drafts?
I'm worried that we'll get points taken off if we turn it in like that.
Guys, I understand what you're talking about, but I just want to say I did spend 4 hours
writing it. And I proofread it. But you know, writing english is hard for me.
Have you tried going to the Center for Writing for help?
I go to the writing center and it helps, but my writing is not going to be perfect.
So what should we do? I'm fine with whatever you guys go with.
Kat if you're okay with it. I could try rewriting it for you.
But, we're supposed to get everyone's perspective for the website. We really need to see Kat's
point of view. Guys, we don't have to rewrite them, they
just need a little bit of editing. I can do that.
Okay. Actually, I noticed a couple of mistakes in
Hollywood's and Lucy's as well. Why don't I just edit everyone's?
That's a really good idea. That way you can polish everyone's writing. And make sure it's
all in the same voice. Alex, and if you're willing to do that, I
can take your job of finding graphics for the presentation.
That would actually really help . Thanks, I actually think this will make our
final project even better!