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welcome everyone this is a Teacher Phil presentation
explaining where you are from
let's go to our first example
this is a letter from a subscriber
dear teacher phil
i would like to tell you about my urination
my urination is called spain
my urination has many provinces and i live in the north
we enjoy fishing and going to the beach
sincerely
antonio
now there's something wrong with this let's find out what is wrong
critique
notice i've underlined the word urination
incorrect word
nation
verses urination
a nation is a country
urination is to expel urine
urination and nation
is not the same thing
my recommendation is to change nation
i would like to tell you about my nation
my country is called spain
it has many provinces and i live in the north
we enjoy fishing end going to the beach
sincerely Antonio
a second example
dear teacher phil
i am writing you
from my jail
might jail is very comfortable
it has many legs
i am from vietnam
do you know vietnam
sincerely Violet Le
there's something wrong with this
jailed is the wrong word
Jail versus Chair Jail is a place where criminals go when arrested
the chair is a wooden or metal object to sit on
You notice this amazing picture has a jail and a chair
in the same photograph
isn't that amazing
my recommendation is to say i a m writing
you from my
chair
excellent
third example
Dear Teacher Phil
our famine is great my mother has famine my father has famine my brother and sister
enjoyed the famine very muchly
the famine is created by my parents and i love them
there are many mistakes in this
famine is the wrong word
muchly is not a real word
Famine versus Family famine is when a country doesn't have enough
family are our relatives such as father, mother, brother,
sister cousins etcetera
hello little penguin
how are you today
my recommendation is to change it to the following example
Dear Teacher Phil our family is great
i live with my mother and father
my brother and sister enjoy spending a lot of time with our family
my parents are doing an excellent job of keeping us all together. From Tina.
thank you have an excellent day