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My teacher says I need to use the same vocabulary for cohesion, but use
different words for a good style. How can I do both?
What are you writing about?
the ICAC
Okay ...
The first time you can call it
the Independent Commission Against Corruption and then put ICAC in
brackets
Then later you can just write ICAC ... I did that
The next step is to use synonyms
words that mean the same
I know what synonym means, but
ICAC is a name. How can you have a synonym for a name?
you can call it
"the commission"
okay that's one, but I need more, or it'll be boring
imagine that
the ICAC is one of a group of similar things. What would those similar things be?
What you mean ... like organisations? Yes! so you can call it
"the organisation"
anymore?
Just apply the same idea
"the body"
Yes
how about
"the graft busters"?
Ohh, too informal for academic writing
"The counter corruption clean up cops"? come on!
cancel clever catchy cliches
Academic writing style is so boring! You are supposed to make the content
interesting! Not the style
flashy styles looks like
you're trying to hide problems with the content ... okay
I'll do flashy content
content?