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of why I wrote my profile the way I did. So without further adeau lets get started! The
first sentence of your profile should grab the reader�s attention! I wrote I�m 28
and an engineer. Wait! Don�t stop reading there�s more to me than that. ( So basically
what I doing is I am taking something boring like an engineer and making it something interesting
and funny. I recently read this profile to a recent seminar I had with a group of women
and they loved the first sentence because it was very different. So I am 28 and an engineer.
Wait! Don�t stop reading there�s more ot me than that! ( And you need to use smiley
face guys as well as exclamation points because it�s very hard to convey emotions in somebodys
profile unless you have that type of punctuation used throughout your profile. So I say I love
to cook! I fancy myself as an up and coming culinary chef producing one off specials.
While you won�t see me on Top Chef Canada anytime soon, cooking is something I�ve
become very passionate about. There�s not better feeling of accomplishment when you�ve
cooked something that�s not only edible, but tastes good. So now I throw in some humor
in. Instead of saying I�m funny. Sure I may have burnt down several kitchens along
the way but what�s the fun of any journey if you don�t have interesting stories to
tell along the way.
I am also a big travel buff, because I love to travel because I am a dreamer. That�s
such a powerful statement, because I am a dreamer. Most guys don�t write that way.
You need to realize that you can use powerful language that women can relate to. Once I
became aware there were a million other places other than here, I had to travel as much as
I could. I love experiencing new languages, people, places, sights and sounds. I travel
to be changed by something I wouldn�t experience if I stayed at home whether it�s walking
along the white sand beaches of cuba or visiting the Taj Mahal in India. Now you can accomplish
this a couple of ways: you could tell a story of a specific place or you could name drop
and put little clues out there for women to comment on. I said white sand beaches of Cuba
or visiting the Taj Mahal. Instead of saying visiting Cuba or India. I�m being specific,
the white sand beaches ellicits a certain kind of imagine in your head, same with the
Taj Mahal in India. So someone whose been there could send me a specific message about
it. Whereas if you said India, India is a very big country. You could have went to a
million places, but I am being very specific, but I am not saying it with a lot of words.
I also say, staying physically active is really important to me regardless of the season.
During the summer I love to be outside playing golf, tennis or basketball with friends, going
for a run in the river valley or checking out the different festivals around the City.
I�ve also recently started taking drum lessons and guitar lessons am now known by my neighbours
as the guy who plays music instead of by my first name. It makes for interesting conversations
on the elevator ride down ( I am being more humorous and I am telling a story. It�s
really important you use humour if you can.
So what I am doing with my life. Now if you remember in part 2, we read some guys profile
and I liked what he wrote so I stole it or I borrowed it as some would say. Well I was
really hoping to save the world, but since I am not currently doing that, recycling weekly
is pretty good. During the day I work as an engineer, which basically means I sit in my
office all day and make bridges and buildings out of lego blocks. At night I am a professional
writer, jet setting around the globe at a moments notice to cover breakthrough stories
in the world of technology. You definitely won�t find that combination elsewhere.:)
I am being humorous and I am painting a picture that this is a really interesting guy. He�s
an engineer by day, but then he�s a writer. I�ve never heard that combination before
a women�s going to think.
So I am really good at knowing the most random trivia. Everyone always comes to me if they
have a question about technology, music, movies, tv shows or pop culture. I�ve noticed that
I know abnormally much about these topics. Seriously, I feel like I could use my knowledge
of pop culture for something, but I don�t know what. Suggestions would be much appreciated(
And you know what? I�ve actually had women message me with suggestions on what I could
use this amazing power for. It�s really important guys that you are humorous and you
could even throw stuff in there like suggestions would be much appreciated. It is always a
good way to bait a women.
So the first thing people notice about me. I�m always smiling and I�m always positive.
The world�s a playground and if you�re not happy, then what�s the point? It�s
such a powerful statement. It�s so important that you don�t talk negative in your profile
because people do not want to be around negative people. I mean do you want to date a women
who is negative? Probably not. Neither does she.
So favourite book, so instead of listing books. I listed a bit in this part but I went into
a little more detail. So favourite book. It�s So Easy and Other Lies By Duff Mckagan. Being
a huge Guns N� Roses fan this was a must read for me. Duff�s use of language is amazing.
The story is riveting and in the end as a reader I felt satisfied. I should have wrote
something not typically seen in other Rock N Roll Biographies. I am going to add that
later. Favourite movies: Social Network, I love you Man, the Rock. Favourite shows: The
Big *** Theory, the Office, House of Cards. Favourite music. Lots of classic rock I list
and I throw in some Katy Perry, Lady Gaga and Taylor Swift. Favourite Food Thai and
Italian.
So now I talk about the six things I could never do with out. So my first thing is Romance.
I say every soul needs it and no one should settle for second best. That�s such a powerful
statement guys and most guys will not put romance. They will put my car, my iPod, my
Phone. Next one is playing my drumset. It allows me to communicate in a way that speaking
doesn�t. My passport, it allows me to enjoy new experiences. Optimism � Always look
on the bright side of life. Sunglasses � Due to my optimism I need shades. It�s a very
different and clever kind of statement and then finally instead of saying music I say
Satellite Radio. I love commercial free music. A little bit of an interesting statement there.
I spend a lot of time thinking about my next travel adventure. Argentina, Iceland, Brazil,
Sweden, Norway, Bali, Thailand. Oh gosh! Too many places to choose from. Guess I have to
do this the old fashion way. Draw names out of a jar(. Suggestions are appreciated too.
On a typical Friday night I am usually outside staying physically active or exploring what
our great City has to offer( Staying physically active is important to me regardless of the
season. During the summer I play tennis. And you know you can maybe repeat yourself a bit
if that�s what you do on a Friday night. In the winter I join the local sports social
club. It�s a great way to exercise and meet new people and breaking up the monotomy of
going to the gym during the week. I�ve also recently started taking drum lessons and am
now known by my neighbours as the guy who plays music instead of by my first name so
I am a bit repeating myself but that�s okay because I have a lot of detail in my profile.
The most private thing I am willing to admit is that aside from being an engineer by day
I am also a writer. I have written for a blog for roughly 12 years or so. It�s so amazing
to read some of my earlier when I was in grade 11 and see how much my writing has evolved
over the years. I do travel a few times a year for my writing job and there�s definitely
some cool stories from those trips�.:) So I am intriguing her with something you should
ask me about in her message or on a first date.
And then I say you should message me if you are someone whose positive, social, likes
to meet new people, can carry on long deep conversations about anything, driven in life
towards their passion and someone whose caring. What�s attractive to me is a women with
a great sense of humour, likes to tease and tease back. So see guys how my profile stood
out and how it was really funny as well compared to a lot of these other guys we read in part
2? So your profile needs to be that same way too because you want your profile to do half
the work, because if you have a great profile, women will message you without you having
to lift a finger. Or maybe if you message a women she will go read your profile and
see what an amazing guy you are. Let me stress one more thing. Your photos should correspond
to what you have written in your profile, so if you talk about your love of travel you
should be showing in some of your photos that you�ve actually traveled to some of these
places just so things match up and it doesn�t seem out of the ordinary. I mean what if you
wrote somebody�s profile and they said they travel all the time but there�s no photos
of them traveling You�d be a little suspicious so you need to make sure that your written
profile your photos complement one another. So guys that concludes part 3 and we are going
to move onto part 4. ! }
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