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Right, which way round did you have it to start with?
So, now it's time for food
There's Adrian, he's eating
There's Dom, he's on the screen
Dom! Are you eating?
OK, so how about
instead of having the relationships going from the start
instead of having...
(# Piano Noise) Can you stop playing the piano!?!
Ben: I dunnow about this whole relationship thing...
Adrian: Can you listen a minute? I haven't finished!
Because I'm trying to think of a way to incorporate something where something moves, something happens
So, instead of having anything at the beginning
have one possible relationship which is hinted to throughout the entire period of the play
in other words something that could happen
but right at the end they decide not to act upon...
Ben: What? So their not in a relationship?
Adrian: No, in other words there's just a spark
but it goes wrong, when it could have gone right
Ben: That's, oh, yeah that's...
Dom: It's kinda like you know where it's going, but it doesn't happen
Adrian: Yes, pretty much
Dom: Ben, it's a very simple concept to grasp, Jesus Ben!
Ben: No, I had that idea as well
Ben: He's eating a Nectar card
So, we've had a productive little session
we've come up with, err, a couple of words
And on that note, I think I'll tuck in