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come on Ginger hit it
Rony that was Impressive
..the rhythm of the melody
it's really good that..
alcohol is a crappy rope pulling idiots
who pull the cart of forgetting
we're big fans of the band
smearing happiness
that's good, get a pen and paper
i'm writing freely, later we'll filter
i want it to be
rhyme, rhyme, rhyme
rhyme, rhyme
ta ta ta ta
rhyme
can you write a sentence
where the idea changes in the last word?
i want to say something like "the drink dims"
and drinking..
is embarrassing
like embarrassing
i think that when you wake up mad at yourself
at noon, bloodshot
and you're bummed about burning your day
in the morning you beat yourself up
and then you go and drink again in the evening
because you understand that's what you do
the metaphor that's running through my head is
sheets of embarrassment hanging to dry
the drink shyly dries in a clear morning
crushed embarrassment and happiness mixed in ugliness
addicted
instead of "happiness mixed in ugliness"
"embarrassment mixed in ugliness"
what do you think?
embarrassment instead of happiness?
there is "crushed embarrassment"
but i think the embarrassment should
no i think it needs to be..
i think he needs a pill
the "mixed" since it's a drink it's ok
but i think we should say "smeared"
i want to do something with the words
as in, so far this was very clever
go back to being the drunk character
hey hey, i'm i drink something
the makeup is a reference to sex?
it's more like the mask you put on when you drink
also makeup like..
when you're covered in lipstick
the drink shyly dries in a clear morning
crushed happiness and embarrassment smeared in makeup
addicted
so hey hey
i'm a drink
vomit nicely
weaning tomorrow
i feel like in a commercial
"kids, don't jump into rivers"
my first time getting stitches
i felt like in Edward Scissorhands
i felt like it was 15 minutes
and he said, i felt like it was an hour