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Hey, Umm, i'm gonna be using the beat off eminems song Role Model
I'll be readin off my screen... I haven't learn the lyrics yet - sorry about
that Because i recently wrore this
Just want to, you know, hear how i sound A'ight....Yo..1, 2. 1, 2
Yo..Mic check..Yo, Yo
I hate this *** up thing called society/ Grab an AK and shoot anyone in sight of me/
Despite the/ fact the frightening/ fight scenes/ excite me/
The iconic, psychic, on his tight ***/ with his psychotic side kick/
My strategical rap tactics/ will kick back whack actors/ the fact is/ I'm hazardous/
grammatical perfection as mad as this/ your factitious rhyming/ questionable timing/ I'm
a perfectionist when it comes to lyrical blinding/ Pandemonium/ when my lyrics hit the streets.
Always on top of the podium/multiple felonies/causing anatomical abnormalities/ drugs, knives, and
thugs surroundin' me/ I'm bound to be/ behind bars - counting/ till I'm sound asleep/ waiting
to be released/ at least/ I got something to live for/
Friends, drugs and an ex I got to kill off./
The multi syllable individual With rap flows darker than aboriginals
Some call me cynical With my uncivil systematic sick skills
The aftermath of my rap attack will be so shocking
It'll leave you catatonic, with your head rocking
A lyrical wordsmith master/ You couldn't a heard this *** faster/
A cynical certified arsehole with no one nastier/ I'm hazardous/rhymes are cancerous/ so when
I spit you wouldn't want battle this/ If you responded back with a lung full of cannabis/
I suggest you approach with caution/
Coz every time I think of you I imagine your body in a coffin/
Crushing your bones - out of proportion/ decomposition of the skin - rottin'/
So full of anger/ I want to asphyxiate you faggots with a coathanger/
I'll *** cut your oesophagus apart with a broken knife/ you'll be chokin'! Eyes/ bleeding
with pain/ I'll make a deep incision in your stomach
/ I'll be careful so I don't...*** it!/ I'll shove in a bucket of poisonous gasses and fumes
Put your dismembered body in a crate and latch it with screws
So uh, please comment
And tell me how you think that went
Lyrics...Flow, Just anything you think i need to fix up.
Just please leave a comment, constructive criticism is welcome. Peace